MUSE MONDAY
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As an author we can write dialogue, so clear and snappy, the
reader knows exactly who's speaking without tags. That's a gift none of us
should take for granted. Likewise, we might create characters so real, so
intriguing, the reader invites them into their lives and hopes they'll stick
around for awhile. Also a gift.
Great dialogue and intriguing characters won't keep readers'
attention if the setting is blurred or worse, glossed over. Even worse, so
unrealistic, the reader throws it against the wall because they cannot relate
to the location. If they can't 'see' it, 'smell' it, or 'feel' it, the story
will fail. You don't want that.
The setting [or world] must be given the same care, in terms
of development, as you would give any of your characters, lead roles or
supporting. Think of the Alaskan town in the Sandra Bullock movie “The
Proposal”. What made that small, out of the way town stay with me as a viewer?
Three distinct scenes stick with me: the bedroom, the bar where the
waiter/religious person strips for the screaming women and the clearing in the
woods where Betty White dances in homage to her Native ancestors. It is the
details, using all five senses, which make those stand out in my mind.
Since this is an audience where I might find a few writers
of fantasy, paranormal and science fiction, I need to start with the World.
Where is
it? Is it real or imagined? Based on something real or imagined.
Make sure
you define the infrastructure: language[s], education system, the philosophy of
medical care from birth to death, the political system[s].
If you're
creating your own planet, like Star Trek or the Kurt Russell Stargate movie,
the sky's the limit for you. Personally, I'd make it as close to Earth as
possible--for your own sanity and that of your reader. Think JD Robb's In Death series. The basics are still
the same but man, she has hyped all the amenities to the max. If Earth isn't
your bag, and you want to do something totally new, keep this in mind: if folks
need anti-gravity shoes to walk around or wear oxygen masks to breathe, how do
they make love?
If there
are other life forms, as in the Star Wars movies, is miscegenation allowed?
What is the
climate? Does it change with the seasons? Do they have seasons? Is this mostly rural and agrarian or is it
urban/suburban?
What are
modes of transportation?
Are there
animals [as in the zoo or on farms or family pets]? Tamed or wild?
What is the
expected life span?
Let's break it down a bit further into the City/Town.
Is it well
built, well planned or is it post-apocalyptic? Is there a system of roads or
highways? Are they maintained, how well is it done and who pays for it?
If
electricity/gas/fresh water doesn't exist, how are those nitty gritty things
supplied?
What is the
political infrastructure? Is there a clearly defined class system? Are there
distinct neighborhoods? How about laws and the enforcement of same. Is there a
criminal justice system? What is the quality?
Does an
educational system exist? What is the quality? Are there institution of higher
education nearby?
How is
medical care delivered? What is the quality of that care?
What are
the geographical formations [lakes, mountains, deserts]?
Leisure
interests, arts, sports?
And now we get to the
Hood.
If we're in
the country, the individual farms will take the place of the hoods, abutting
the next farm or small town, the center of social life. If we're in the city,
what are the dwellings like, well built or fabricated as in the favelas of Rio de Janeiro or homeless
communities beneath subway stations? Are your characters part of the In Crowd
or on the outside margins, looking in?
The
Residence:
Is this a
single family unit or a multiple dwelling like a high-rise apartment building?
How is it maintained? The same questions asked before this apply here. Is this
a glum and dreary place or is it bright and inviting personal exploration. Are
the individual rooms different from the whole? Throw in something unexpected,
something romantic. Surprise the reader. It keeps them turning those pages.
Don't try to do this alone. Use your writer pals or critique
group. It is clear when imaginative people come together, any number of
wonderful things can happen.
Excerpt
from Hauntings in the Garden:Caper Magic coming from The Wild Rose Press, Oct
27, 2014
Hank let out a holler just before a huge toothy grin spanned
the borders of his gaunt cheeks. “Top o' the marnin' to ye, Missus!” he cackled
to someone exiting the front door of the stone cottage next door.
Taking the
concrete steps to the sidewalk in two lithe moves, a woman in a slinky dress
the color of ripe tomatoes glanced their way and responded in a distinct Irish
brogue. “And the ass end of the day to ye, Mistur Pierpont.”
Intrigued
by rich tone of her voice, Nick craned his neck and found one of the witches
from yesterday's parade—minus the droopy velvet hat—passing within steps of
Hank's porch. A bulging garment bag hung over one arm; she looked headed in the
direction of the pier at the end of Vincentian Lane. Damned if right then a
wind didn't jump up off the lake and mold the filmy length of scarlet against
each curve of her body. Long black hair—and there seemed to be a good ten
pounds of it—flowed over her shoulders, caressing her body like a lover as she
marched toward Dingle Pier. As his heart bumped into a trip hammer beat, Nick
reminded himself to breathe.
“Ferget yer
broom, Missus?” Hank called out to her retreating back.
“In the
repair shop,” she replied over one shoulder, winging that glorious onyx hair
away from lips painted to match her dress. “Gettin' fitted with a couple of
those fancy turbo boosters, it is.”
Hank
chuckled, then went back to his coffee. “Turbo boosters. That Nunie Doyle; sure
is a pistol.”
An
invisible fist reached down to grab Nick's gut in a vise. As recognition
flared, long buried rage took a slow crawling path up his spine.
Writing under the names Kat Henry Doran and Veronica Lynch,
author Kathy Cottrell uses her experience as a nurse, victim advocate and
insurance investigator for background in her award winning novels and novellas.
Her stories are set in her favorite places to visit: the Catskill and
Adirondack Mountains as well as the Saint Lawrence River in the historic
Thousand Islands region of Upstate and Northern New York State.
When not writing, or chasing grandchildren, Kathy spends her
time designing and making tote bags and aprons to custom order.