MUSE MONDAY
Please welcome my guest, Colleen L. Donnelly with a very entertaining post...
It’s
movie night in front of the DVD player and the males are voting for action
movies – conquests, fighting, and chest-thumping winners bloodied from their
victories. The females argue against two hours of unrelated sequences of
brutality and heroic feats, hoping for a more tightly woven saga involving a
hero and a heroine on an adventure riddled with conflict and camaraderie until
they ultimately wind up in a chest-to-chest loving embrace. Two different…wait…are
those two types of scenarios actually different? Can the story of two fighters
in a ring parallel the conflicts of a boy and a girl on their way to becoming a
couple? “Ewwww” and “No” are the most likely reactions from the moving-watching
crowd, but I beg to differ.
I
looked at what I write and the movies I watch (or am subjected to) and
discovered relationships are the basis of almost any story told – a boy pitted
against the elements in order to survive, a girl finding herself loved in spite
of self-doubt, a country vying against another for power, aliens and other
planets warring against earth, animals forming unlikely bonds to overcome
obstacles, thieves trying to outsmart the law… All of them hinge on relationships
in one form or another – one being encountering another or themselves, and clambering
toward a hopefully positive outcome.
My
writer’s eye watches for conflict, seeking out what will make or break a
relationship, and ultimately a good story. Even though none of my characters
resolve their issues with guns or soccer balls, the wars are there – the
unloved wife accused of infidelity in “Asked For,” the young woman whose heart
belonged to another instead of to the man her family had arranged for her to
marry in “Love on a Train.” Or, the conflict searing enough to split a family
into two warring factions, unforgiveness vs forgiveness, in “Mine to Tell.”
So,
can peace and harmony reign in front of the television between the two factions
warring over physical vs emotional conflict? Can those with romantic notions
see heroes vanquishing and vanquished by more than a heroine’s heart? And can
those with non-romantic notions concede John Wayne did win and lose less manly
sorts of battles, and did so without a gun? To a degree, yes. Because, no
matter what our pleasure, there is a relationship buried in any encounter
somewhere.
“Mine
to Tell” is the story of the Crouse family shame, three generations accepting
great-grandfather Isaac’s claim that his wife, Julianne, had done the
unthinkable when she disappeared for two weeks. Great-granddaughter, Annabelle,
on the cusp of her own marriage, decides to do the unthinkable herself and give
Julianne a chance to tell her side of the story. With both great-grandparents
long since deceased, Annabelle unboards the closed-up house Isaac had relegated
Julianne to, and moves in, believing the truth is there somewhere and it will
set the Crouse family women free. Annabelle’s actions further split her family
as well as her own engagement as she determines to find the truth, her only
faithful companions in her venture being her great-grandmother’s hidden story
and the quiet young man down the road she’d ignored while growing up.
Excerpt:
“Mine
to tell,” Kyle said suddenly. It was a jolt. I was yanked from my mental tumble
into a pit of unredemption. Alex looked up too, a quizzical expression on his
face. “Julianne left a story behind,” Kyle continued. “Some of it speculation
and rumors by people who don’t know, and the rest of it by her own hand. It was
a love story. One that was countered with suffering.”
We
were all quiet. I looked at him, my heart melting as I heard his masculine
voice speak of love and suffering. I wanted to lean across the table and hug
him, but I was too afraid.
Alex
leaned back in his chair. “What my father went through didn’t feel like love
when we were little.”
“But
maybe it was,” Kyle persisted, his tone smooth and even. “Does love always turn
out the way we want it to?” Then he looked at me. “Julianne Crouse was a fine
woman. We haven’t finished her story, but she suffered, and she was fine
indeed.”
Tears
came to my eyes. “Thank you,” I squeaked. Kyle stood and walked around the
table to me. He helped me stand as he thanked them for their time. He retrieved
Julianne’s picture, took my hand, and together we went to the door, Alex and
his wife following us.
“I
hope you’re right,” Alex said, running his hand through his thin, brittle hair
as we stepped outside. “My father had some things to come to terms with, but he
was a good man. A better man later in life, when he told us he was sorry. I
never knew for what.”
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