WICKED WEDNESDAY
Ah, one of my favorite days of the week...Wicked Wednesday...and Diane has a fun guest post!
Villains are the heroes of their own story. Each villain
thinks s/he’s in the right. (Rather than keep using s/he and her/him, I’m going
to use masculine pronouns, even though we know women can be villains, too.)
Psychopaths are different and not the subject of this post.
A good villain has his own GMC. When we’re writing our
stories, we need to write our villain’s Goal, Motivation, and Conflict, as well
as the main characters. What does he want, why, and what’s preventing him from
getting it? The goal can be admirable—supporting family, retrieving what’s been
stolen—or not, but understandable. Revenge, greed, righting a wrong.
I enjoy reading stories where the reader doesn’t know who
the villain is. In my Alex O’Hara PI mystery series, the stories are written in
Alex’s point of view. The reader only knows what she knows. As the story
unfolds, she (and the reader) sees the clues and red herrings and doesn’t know
which to trust. When the villain reveals himself, it’s a surprise for Alex. Is
it a surprise for the reader? I hope so, but I never underestimate the
intelligence of readers.
In my Outer Rim science fiction romances, the villain is
identified right off the bat. Hallart, a gangster, wants to rule the galaxy. Drugs,
prostitution, extortion, racketeering. If it’s illegal, Hallart is into it. The
reader knows in the first book, The Pilot,
that Hallart is a villain. Either he or his minions are the villains in each
story. What the reader doesn’t know is who are his minions. Hopefully, that will
be a surprise. For reader satisfaction, the minions are caught, or at least
identified. And, good minions that they are, they won’t help the authorities
capture their boss.
Eventually, Hallart has to be stopped. That’s at the center
of the fourth Outer Rim Novel, The Spy,
my work in progress. As I write the last book in the series, I haven’t figured
out how, but I do know who will bring him down. If I accomplish my goal, The Spy will be available in late fall.
Developing a good villain can be a challenge. The writer
can’t let the villain take over the story. But, the writer can’t write so
little that the villain is flat. Finding a balance is the key. For a writer,
understanding the villain, what makes him tick, makes a great story.
Alex O’Hara PI mysteries
Outer Rim Novels
About the Author
Diane Burton combines her love
of mystery, adventure, science fiction and romance into writing romantic
fiction. Besides the science fiction romance
Switched and Outer Rim series,
she is the author of One Red Shoe, a
romantic suspense, and the Alex O’Hara PI mystery series. She is also a
contributor to two anthologies: Portals,
Volume 2 and How I Met My Husband.
Diane and her husband live in West Michigan. They have two children and five
grandchildren.
For more info and excerpts from her books,
visit Diane’s website: http://www.dianeburton.com
Connect with Diane
Burton online
Goodreads: Diane Burton Author
Pinterest: http://pinterest.com/dmburton72/
Thanks for hosting me, Brenda. I enjoyed writing about villains.
ReplyDeleteSo great to have you. Love your take on this subject!
DeleteSo true, Diane. I love complex villians--always makes for an unputdownable book!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Alyssa. I want to be surprised, too. That takes a lot of work.
DeleteGreat post. I agree, villains should have their own GMC, and should be somewhat relatable and/or sympathetic. I've been accused of writing more realistic villains than my main characters are. Hmmm...wonder if that means something... You do a great job with your villains! I love trying to figure out whodunit along with Alex.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Alicia. That's high praise coming from you.
DeleteThis is a great post, Diane. Sometimes I don't include my villain's GMC until I've written the first draft, and then I ask myself--why on earth did s/he do that? I'm so impressed by the cozy mystery writers with all their twists and turns and red herrings.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Alina. With some of my villains, I have to stop and figure out the why. Not always easy.
DeleteLove your books, Diane and loved the post!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Kara.
DeleteWonderful post Diane!
ReplyDeleteGood luck and God's blessings
PamT
Thanks, Pam.
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